Stranger Than Fiction needs to use it, and does so just as you'd expect, however, I liked it - I liked its use of imagery, the personification of the watch, the quirky nature it brought to Crick and on the narrator herself.
And I especially liked this bit:
HAROLD
I'm being followed by a woman's voice.
They just stare at each other for a momment.
DAVE
(concerned)
Okay. What is she saying?
HAROLD
She's... she's narrating.
DAVE
Harold. You're standing at the water
cooler. What is she narrating?
HAROLD
I... I... I had to stop filing.
Watch. Listen. Listen.
Harold continues to organize papers into files.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
The sound the paper made against the
folder had the same tone as a wave
scraping against sand. And when
Harold thought about it, he listened
to enough waves every day to
constitute what he imagined to be a
deep and endless ocean...
Harold stops organizing the papers. He turns to Dave.
HAROLD
Did you hear that?
DAVE
You mean, you filing?
HAROLD
No. The... the... The voice.
DAVE
Nu-huh.
HAROLD
[Oh God]... Dave it's, it's, it's...
(pause)
The frightening part is that sometimes
I do imagine a deep and endless ocean.
I'm being followed by a woman's voice.
They just stare at each other for a momment.
DAVE
(concerned)
Okay. What is she saying?
HAROLD
She's... she's narrating.
DAVE
Harold. You're standing at the water
cooler. What is she narrating?
HAROLD
I... I... I had to stop filing.
Watch. Listen. Listen.
Harold continues to organize papers into files.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
The sound the paper made against the
folder had the same tone as a wave
scraping against sand. And when
Harold thought about it, he listened
to enough waves every day to
constitute what he imagined to be a
deep and endless ocean...
Harold stops organizing the papers. He turns to Dave.
HAROLD
Did you hear that?
DAVE
You mean, you filing?
HAROLD
No. The... the... The voice.
DAVE
Nu-huh.
HAROLD
[Oh God]... Dave it's, it's, it's...
(pause)
The frightening part is that sometimes
I do imagine a deep and endless ocean.
Aside from how brilliant I think this extract is (and the to-and-fro of the script between narrator and Harold) the narrator's dialogue acts as a brilliant narrative show-don't-tell. This alludes to how very unhappy Harold is in his life, how his job goes forever on - which leads very nicely to the conclusion.
It is that kind of immediate narrative description that I'm beginning to pick out of Murakami's writing: pick up the theme, deliver it succinctly with a nice ole simile or metaphor, relate it to the character and move on.
Note: Script extract from available script at SimplyScripts.com
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