Firstly, Good old Chrono posted a great article recently on his blog (Journey of the Scribe): Things I Learned from Improv. And, made this points (that are as important for Comedy as they are for Drama):
- Every scene needs conflict.
- Once you have conflict, escalate it!
- When telling a story, avoid thought words such as 'decided', 'pondered', 'considered', etc.
- Avoid 'talking heads' scenes. Characters should at least be doing something while they talk.
- Fart jokes and scenes about gynecologists make most people groan or cringe, unless your audience is 5-year olds or horny teenagers.
- In each scene, try to ask yourself, 'What is my character trying to accomplish this scene?'
- Characters all have unique mannerisms and ways of speaking. Try to avoid defaulting to your own voice.
- If you're not enjoying a scene, chances are no one else is either.
- Subtext is amazing when you can pull it off.
- Make every scene and every character larger than life, but still believable.
There are three plots - one main, and two sub-plots:
- Bernard can't do his own accounting or fill in his tax forms and is desperate for assistance
- Manny is overly stressed by his accounting job, but having mistakenly swallowed the Little Book of Calm, could die.
- Fran's trying to solve the riddle of the latest purchase for her shop - what could it be, and will her trying to work out the answer keep her from being with her friend during labour
- Blagging / Lack of Knowledge/ Trying to Impress
- Character - general funny act
- Character - Idiosyncrasy
- Character - Out of Character Response / Take on Persona of Another
- Character - Over the Top
- Character - Specific Saying / Way of Speaking
- Contrasting / Reversal (Happy <-> Sad / Idyllic <-> Hell)
- Escalate Situation / Responses
- Forgetfulness
- Getting Caught Out / Saving Face
- Harming Oneself / Putting Self in Harms Way
- Inability to cope with inanimate objects
- Irony
- Lack of Self-Awareness
- Lack of Social Skills
- Malapropism / misuse of Word, Phrase / Off-Cuff Wrong Saying
- Obstructing another character (verbally / physically)
- Offensive / Blunt / Rude
- Reaction to Incident
- Reminder of Something Character is Trying to Avoid
- Repeat Something (Twist it on the repeat)
- Sarcasm
- Song / Poetry that doesn't Rhyme
- Stating the Obvious
- Stereotyping
- Surprise Response (abnormal in situation)
- Taking Anger Out on Others
- Unexpected / Unexplained Act whose Outcome Leads to Explanation
- Unexpected Observation / Link
Scrubs - Season 1 Episode 1
Scrubs is more gangshow that Black Books, and the plots resolve around a mural of life in the hospital, introducing us to the characters and following themes of fitting in (place in the hierarchy) / committing to the work / overcoming fears of inadequacy / making friends and rivals.
Here are the comedic elements in use:
- Adopting a Funny Voice
- Being Anal
- Belittling Others
- Blagging / Lack of Knowledge/ Trying to Impress
- Character - Idiosyncrasy
- Comedic Dreams / Words Put in the Mouths of Others
- Contrasting / Reversal (Happy <-> Sad / Idyllic <-> Hell)
- Fish out of Water
- Gesturing / While Others are Talking
- Giving Names (Derogatory) to Others
- Going off on One
- Humorous Observation
- Hypocrite
- Making Enemies
- misleading People
- Oneupmanship
- Pop-Culture References
- Sarcasm
- Slapstick
- Stitching Someone Up - Personal Gain / Avoidance
- Talking Behind Someone's Back
- Trying to be One of the Gang
- Worrying the Wider Public with offhand Comment
Red Dwarf, like Scrubs, opens with a lot of characters, but manages to shirk them pretty quickly with a heavy dose of Cadmium. There isn't a unifying theme, but the plot lines set up the main situation for the show along with Rimmer's perpetual subplot:
- Lister is put in stasis because he won't reveal his cat, leading to Rimmer not fixing a drive plate that kills everyone with Cadmium, making Lister the last human alive
- Rimmer fails his exam
- Cat is the last surviving member of the cat race
- 1 of the 7 Deadly Sins
- Barefaced Lying
- Bending Rules for personal gain and claiming its not
- Character - Idiosyncrasy
- Choice of Clothing / Tools
- Conflict / Winding Each Other Up
- Crossing Objects / Animals (Woolly-Jumper)
- Delusions of Grandeur
- Dissing / Ignoring Authority
- Escalating a Wind Up
- Fish Out of Water
- Going the Wrong Way
- Hamming - Grand Literary Acting
- Inappropriate Music to a Scene
- Inappropriateness
- Indirect Double Entendres
- Jade comments - Lack of Knowledge (history, geography, science) / Incorrect Terminology
- Losing Mind
- Making a Fool of Another / Getting them to Make a Fool of Themselves
- Me-First Ideology
- Misunderstanding / Not Bothering to Understand
- Nerdy
- Offensive / Blunt / Rude
- Punchline Interruption (of someone else's dialogue - funny or otherwise)
- React to Incident / Situation but leave it for Someone Else
- Repetition and Ignorance (They're all Dead Dave… Everyone's Dead)
- Saving Face
- Slapstick
- Superiority
- Trying to be Careful and Making it Worse
- Twisting Meaning of Someone's Statement
And finally we have the IT Crowd, the newest of the four, and not necessarily the funniest (some of the character idiosyncrasies are vaguely annoying), but it's still a masterclass. Here we have the introduction of all the characters meshed in with two plots:
- Power play within the team
- Raising the profile of the team
- Anticlimax - from the big build up (McGuyver / A-Team sequence)
- Blagging / Lack of Knowledge/ Trying to Impress
- Caught Out
- Character - Idiosyncrasy
- Conflict against 3rd person bring 1st and 2nd together (then in-fighting)
- Contrasting / Reversal (Happy <-> Sad / Idyllic <-> Hell)
- Determination (To Do / Not Do Something)
- Diffusing Situations
- Failure to Listen / Lack of Interest
- Hiding / Avoidance
- Increasing an Alert Status
- Jade comments - Lack of Knowledge (history, geography, science) / Incorrect Terminology
- Job Specific Cliché
- Mania
- Matching Banter (Down a Blind Alley)
- Mirroring Someone / Object
- Missing the Obvious - Stated / Visible
- Mistaking the Secret Nod / Talk / Handshake
- Not Picking up the Vibe
- Odd / Incorrect Analogy
- Playing on a stereotyped lack of knowledge
- Private Joke / Job Specific Joke - not got by others
- Proving them Wrong
- puerile Humour - Self Aware
- Repetition (normal)
- Self Loathing
- Slapstick
- Slow Response / Reaction (Purposeful)
- Stress Induced by Others
- Sudden Outburst
- Telling the Wrong Story
- The "What did they say?" or "I'm not talking to them, tell them this…" 3 way
- The Kitten -> Tiger Unexpected Unleashing
- The Only One Who Knows - Being Ignored
- Toilet Humour
- Used / Abused - Bemoaning Treatment at the Hands of Others
- Wordplay
- 1 of the 7 Deadly Sins
- Adopting a Funny Voice
- Anticlimax - from the big build up (McGuyver / A-Team sequence)
- Barefaced Lying
- Being Anal
- Belittling Others
- Bending Rules for personal gain and claiming its not
- Blagging / Lack of Knowledge/ Trying to Impress
- Caught Out
- Character - general funny act
- Character - Idiosyncrasy
- Character - Out of Character Response / Take on Persona of Another
- Character - Over the Top
- Character - Specific Saying / Way of Speaking
- Choice of Clothing / Tools
- Comedic Dreams / Words Put in the Mouths of Others
- Conflict / Winding Each Other Up
- Conflict against 3rd person bring 1st and 2nd together (then in-fighting)
- Contrasting / Reversal (Happy <-> Sad / Idyllic <-> Hell)
- Crossing Objects / Animals (Woolly-Jumper)
- Delusions of Grandeur
- Determination (To Do / Not Do Something)
- Diffusing Situations
- Dissing / Ignoring Authority
- Escalate Situation / Responses
- Escalating a Wind Up
- Failure to Listen / Lack of Interest
- Fish Out of Water
- Forgetfullness
- Gesturing / While Others are Talking
- Getting Caught Out / Saving Face
- Giving Names (Derogatory) to Others
- Going off on One
- Going the Wrong Way
- Hamming - Grand Literary Acting
- Harming Oneself / Putting Self in Harms Way
- Hiding / Avoidance
- Humorous Observation
- Hypocrite
- Inability to cope with inanimate objects
- Inappropriate Music to a Scene
- Inappropriateness
- Increasing an Alert Status
- Indirect Double Entendres
- Irony
- Jade comments - Lack of Knowledge (history, geography, science) / Incorrect Terminology
- Job Specific Cliché
- Lack of Self-Awareness
- Lack of Social Skills
- Losing Mind
- Making a Fool of Another / Getting them to Make a Fool of Themselves
- Making Enemies
- Malapropism / misuse of Word, Phrase / Off-Cuff Wrong Saying
- Mania
- Matching Banter (Down a Blind Alley)
- Me-First Ideology
- Mirroring Someone / Object
- Misleading People
- Missing the Obvious - Stated / Visible
- Mistaking the Secret Nod / Talk / Handshake
- Misunderstanding / Not Bothering to Understand
- Nerdy
- Not Picking up the Vibe
- Obstructing another character (verbally / physically)
- Odd / Incorrect Analogy
- Offensive / Blunt / Rude
- Oneupmanship
- Playing on a stereotyped lack of knowledge
- Pop-Culture References
- Private Joke / Job Specific Joke - not got by others
- Proving them Wrong
- Puerile Humour - Self Aware
- Punchline Interruption (of someone else's dialogue - funny or otherwise)
- React to Incident / Situation but leave it for Someone Else
- Reaction to Incident
- Reminder of Something Character is Trying to Avoid
- Repeat Something (Twist it on the repeat)
- Repetition (normal)
- Repetition and Ignorance (They're all Dead Dave… Everyone's Dead)
- Sarcasm
- Saving Face
- Self Loathing
- Slapstick
- Slow Response / Reaction (Purposeful)
- Song / Poetry that doesn't Rhyme
- Stating the Obvious
- Stereotyping
- Stitching Someone Up - Personal Gain / Avoidance
- Stress Induced by Others
- Sudden Outburst
- Superiority
- Surprise Response (abnormal in situation)
- Taking Anger Out on Others
- Talking Behind Someone's Back
- Telling the Wrong Story
- The "What did they say?" or "I'm not talking to them, tell them this…" 3 way
- The Kitten -> Tiger Unexpected Unleashing
- The Only One Who Knows - Being Ignored
- Toilet Humour
- Trying to be Careful and Making it Worse
- Trying to be One of the Gang
- Twisting Meaning of Someone's Statement
- Unexpected / Unexplained Act whose Outcome Leads to Explanation
- Unexpected Observation / Link
- Used / Abused - Bemoaning Treatment at the Hands of Others
- Wordplay
- Worrying the Wider Public with offhand Comment
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